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Mi scrivi
Tagliente
Io accuso e rispondo
Con medesima forza
Con molta più forza
Crudele
Mi dici
Lo sono
Concordo
Ma forse tu ignori
Che intanto contemplo
Il fume che scorre
Che lava e modella
le cose sommerse.
E forse tu ignori
Che a mente io conto
Il tempo e lo spazio
Che separano un uomo
Dal sonno profondo.
My Shannon (Italian, translation in descript)
I've written down this little poetry in a sad night. It refers to a very bad day, in which a lot of awful things have happened.
The water, in this case the river Shannon, has always a calming effect on me, but also it brought deep thoughts.
Here I provide a (maybe not very good) english translation.

You write me
sharp words
I feel them and answer
with the same strength
with more and more strength
You're cruel
you say
I am
I agree.
But maybe you don't know
that in the meantime I admire
The river which flows
which wash and model
the submerged things 
And maybe you don't know
that in my mind I number
the time and the space
that divide a man
from the very deep sleep.
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Camparbio Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Grazie per il "fav"! :)
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bettaskate89 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
Di nulla, è meritatissimo! :)
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Camparbio Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Mi fa piacere! :)
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Aimski Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014   Traditional Artist
Welcome to The Graphite Club :)
We look forward to seeing your work!
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bettaskate89 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014
Thank you very much! Beautiful group
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Aimski Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014   Traditional Artist
You're welcome :)
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CakeUpStudio Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014
thank you for faving my black roses cake a while ago Dance!
may the Llama I offer in return remind you of my gratitude if you ever decide to +fav any of my other works in the future since I won't be spaming you with more 'thank you' notes Hug  but I'm always happy to answer comments or questions if you have any :D (Big Grin)
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theultimatepjofan Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
Thanks for the fav!! (:
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BlackBlossomJewelry Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Thanks for the fave!
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